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from swartzfeger/Jay (2,059) 
on July 8, 2010 7:42:29 AM CDT
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Just to add to hat the others have said, it would be nice to have her forehead and face have the amount of details present that you captured in her hands, Some contrast adjustment might help with that. Namaste.
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from wolli/Ian (56,891) 
on July 8, 2010 7:13:37 AM CDT
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Wonderful detail here Suchit but the tones are awfully flat - some PP work on the tones should help. Unfortunately the BG tones are similar to her face which lessens her impact.
Regards, Ian.
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From suchit/Suchit (24,339)
on July 8, 2010 8:41:32 AM CDT
Yes, I now see the need for a much higher contrast. You're right about the BG as well. Point noted.
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from dnd/Dnd (12,700)
on July 8, 2010 7:00:10 AM CDT
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As Mehrdad said below - you have done cropping and conversion very well but loose the contrast. I've tried a fast post processing to 'invert' the overall light - make the face lighter than the background. Check here my version of Piligrim. May be you will like it. Cheers!
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From mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,688)
on July 8, 2010 7:03:55 AM CDT
Mmmmm your version gets 2TU ! ;-) but I have to say, this could be done because of Suchit basically strong job. ;-) Regards.
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From dnd/Dnd (12,700)
on July 8, 2010 7:06:16 AM CDT
:))) Thanks! Agree with you of'course. The source have to be strong. Post processing is just a spices ;)
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From mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,688)
on July 8, 2010 8:41:34 AM CDT
But spice also is not all buds! No one can cook well just expert cooks!
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From suchit/Suchit (24,339)
on July 8, 2010 8:40:30 AM CDT
Thank you DND for taking the trouble. That was very helpful. I see the point about higher contrast and more light on the face verses the background. Thank you for the "live demo". :)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,688)
on July 8, 2010 6:56:07 AM CDT
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Suchit, I think black and white submission of photo is better than color version as there was distracting hot colored backgrounds which has much less effect in B&W version. Sharpness and DOF is good. But her face is undershadow and light direction is not well. But overall Its good Shot.
Regards, Mehrdad
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