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from wuploteg/Guillermo (11,425) 
on July 6, 2010 9:16:51 AM CDT
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Her eyes are beautiful...I like the over all shot, love the overall series, and gotta agree on the background...
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From dena1/Dena (43,855)
on July 6, 2010 12:24:35 PM CDT
Thank you very much Guillermo,Cheers......Dena.
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from dnd/Dnd (12,700)
on July 6, 2010 7:24:59 AM CDT
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Dena, it's a 2TU portrait definitely. But this green is very distractive. I've got CRT pro monitor calibrated and see too bright yellow-and-green in the area of her shoulder. It could be easily fixed using desaturation tool over green channel in PS. Expression and composition are great.
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From dena1/Dena (43,855)
on July 6, 2010 7:39:37 AM CDT
Thanks so much Dnd,For time and kind critique,You say right about the bright yellow-and-green in the area of her shoulder,i try to edit it,Cheers......Dena.
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from samias/Asghar (3,654)
on July 6, 2010 5:40:03 AM CDT
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Hi Dena , Good composition , good subject , nice color but according to me you
can edite it better by removing noise from it . Thanks for your sharing& good luck.
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From dena1/Dena (43,855)
on July 6, 2010 6:37:34 AM CDT
Thank you very much Asghar,For in put and your advise,Cheers.......Dena.
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from akiskan/Ismail (35,169)
on July 6, 2010 4:00:40 AM CDT
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Hello Dena, This Shot to me title shot is very nice emotive Picture. Portrait of a beautiful kid was. Who knows what the future life of this little-per. Life begins negative. Best Regards, Ismail ...
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From dena1/Dena (43,855)
on July 6, 2010 4:12:18 AM CDT
Thank you Ismail,For stop and kindly words,Cheers......Dena.
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from michal235/Michal (125,448)
on July 6, 2010 2:57:51 AM CDT
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Beautiful portrait Dena, amazing look and expression on face, you very well captured pose of this little girl. Sharpness is good, very well timing, I didn't see here noise. Beautiful work Dena. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Michal.
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From magewalker/Liam (304)
on July 14, 2010 7:17:00 PM CDT
In ways, I would love to give this shot a 2TD, but it has already been shown to be correctable to some extent.
First off, I can not see this as being unaltered, the colors are near blinding on the shirt with the addition of hot spots on the visible shoulder. The pole/wall/thing she is leaning on would appear to have been adjusted so much as to give it a ghost image. Her face, arm and the background are so dull as to look as if you actually pasted the other two elements back on after adjusting them (this would explain that double image on the blue part). Lastly, this is well beyond "noise" and solidly into pixelation - even the hair, which is showing the closest to detail shows the tell tale box pattern.
As I said, I would give this 2TD, but it is fixable. I can not see giving it even 1TU as I find it to be that far off the mark. As such, I leave this comment and do not negatively affect your rating.
Regards, Liam
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