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		from esspressoman/Jon (23,225) on May 16, 2010 7:12:15 PM CDT (1) Interesting, colorful subject, Jorge. Focus seems a bit soft and the crop on the left seems odd as it has cut through the lamp and created a visual distraction there. I also find the bright blue border to be another distracting element. I would experiment with a few different crops hoping to exploit the stark, graphic quality of this door. Thanks for sharing, ~Jon Reply  Show ratings  From ianworthington/Ian (48) on May 16, 2010 7:22:09 PM CDT Interestingly enough I didn't even notice the blue border until I read your post. Reply
		from ianworthington/Ian (48) on May 16, 2010 7:03:01 PM CDT (1) Great colours in this, not overcooked. Not sure though how I feel about the door being *just* off center, the rhs skewed, and the lamp on the left cut through. The highlight and shadow at top left is also just a bit distracting. Apart from that, I like it and it's attention-grabbing. And thanks for posting it: I'm working on a door series of my own and it seems its easier to see the problems and pitfalls in other people's images than in one's own! Reply  Show ratings

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