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A spring day

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Title     A spring day
Photographer     botris/Raymond (714) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     animal
Category     Animal
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     April 7, 2010 2:34:48 PM CDT
Views     167
Rating     4 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from vidcanon/Chris (1,238) Send mail to this user on April 7, 2010 5:16:43 PM CDT (1) Early critique

Hi Raymond. Very nice composition and timing. I would maybe clone out the second bird from the top to give it more balance. A bit grainy as mentioned. Keep shooting. Regards , Chris.

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Thumb-up    from nwickliff/Nakean (1,996) Send mail to this user on April 7, 2010 3:09:08 PM CDT (1) Early critique

Ahh yes spring! I'm assuming this is quite a hefty crop as there are pixels everywhere. It's a shame your shutter speed was too slow to capture the flapping wings in detail. The entire photograph lacks detail and sharpness. I feel like you could loose the space to the right of the image; it doesn't add anything. Way to keep your eyes open and camera ready. Keep shooting as I'm sure one of these will turn out amazing. This one just isn't it for me. Thanks for sharing!

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From botris/Raymond (714) Send mail to this user on April 7, 2010 3:17:01 PM CDT

You are right but it is a P&S cam !

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from urbanthrash/Abigail (106) Send mail to this user on April 7, 2010 2:44:13 PM CDT (2) Early critique

well timed image, and the colours and exposure is all good :) the only thing bothering me is the digital grain, can that be fixed in photo shop? thanks for sharing :)

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From botris/Raymond (714) Send mail to this user on April 7, 2010 2:51:14 PM CDT

Thanks Abigail well it can be done with PS .

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