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from dmitrys/Dmitry (44) 
on November 20, 2009 10:24:03 AM CST
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Hi Mario! Congratulations, it's a really good shot, especially the red spot of the umbrellla. Maybe the umbrella itself should be sharpened a little bit?
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from orsha1/Shahar (2,151)
on November 20, 2009 6:47:43 AM CST
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hi mario and welcome. the combination of a silhouette and a red spot, is very nice and could have produse a very good pic' if it was sharp enough. maybe what disturber me, IMHO, is the color of the sky. a very good try. keep on and thanks or sharing.
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from jlny100/Jeff (705)
on November 20, 2009 6:44:34 AM CST
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Great concept, but the background doesn't work well for you here, and think you may have needed a tripod for this. Think you must have seen the light of the sky and umbrella and sought a great composition including people and a vast surroundings, it seems good, but there's just a few things working against you here as well. Also might recommend cropping out the dark foreground to just about 1-2mm as it does not appear to add to the photo.
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From admin/admin (0)
on November 20, 2009 7:55:33 AM CST
Welcome to Photosig! Photosig is a site that really stresses critiques both to help the photographer getting them but also as a self learning tool when a critic writes one. It is recommended that members write three critiques for every photo submitted. If you have any questions about how the site works please go to the FAQ section of the site for most commonly asked questions. The site also has a forum section for discussing different topics with other members of the site. Finally the site really stresses the importance of writing critiques for other members and there is a page for help in writing critiques if you need some. It is located at the Photosig Critique Tutorial page. To write a conforming critique, it must be 15 unique and correctly spelled English words. Again, welcome to Photosig and we hope you find the site helpful for your photography.
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