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from kazemir/Steve (3,569) 
on November 16, 2009 7:18:38 PM CST
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If you can, try to post a larger version...it is hard to tell details, and get the full effect with the smaller image. I see I am not the only one who likes to snap pictures of pencil crayons: http://www.photosig.com/go/photos/view?id=2372171 I don;t mind your more "earthy" tones, with the darker table, but I find the crayons are a bit high in the frame, and I feel like I would like to see a larger DOF here, or a more defined point of interest to focus on. Also, as is the case in my image as well, the highlights are a bit harsh. I am going to retry my shots with a diffuser over the lights.
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from ssrr/Samer (1,820)
on November 16, 2009 7:01:23 PM CST
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Hi Rocio and welcome to PhotoSIG, your picture is too small (size wise) to be properly judged, when you upload pics try to use up all the allowed size.. i like your point of view, i don't like very much the table color against those pencils.. i could predict sharpness is pretty good, although not very obvious from the size of the pic, lighting could be improved, you have a couple of hot spots on the pencils.. there is also an obvious vertical line of blue at the left edge of the picture.. thanks for sharing.. cheers..samer
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From admin/admin (0)
on November 16, 2009 6:39:45 PM CST
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