Bird on a seed plant 2


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Title     Bird on a seed plant 2
Photographer     arkj/Abdul (2,884) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Birds
Categories     Animal
Nature
Snapshot
Camera     SONY A200
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 7, 2009 4:04:06 AM CST
Views     195
Rating     9 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from biglens/Sten (1,548) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 11, 2009 10:00:14 AM CST (0)

hi,this one is good,colours,sharpness,lightning and position..i would like to see who it looks if you had cloned out those things in the BG.at my opinion it ceartenly would improve this shot.. anyway you have done a good work here!! best regards sten

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Thumb-up    from danmontero/Daniel (4,295) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 5:35:27 AM CST (4)

very nice colors, but I miss a bit more of reflection in the eye., The plant in the bottom left corner doesn't help to composition. Thanks for sharing and cheers from Canary Islands

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From arkj/Abdul (2,884) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 5:44:31 AM CST

Thanks dear Daniel for apprecaited my shot and for your kind words.Thanks again for stoping by and your precious time. Best of regards. Abdul..

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from highmoor/Hero (416) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:42:46 AM CST (4) Early critique

Hi Abdul. The picture shows the bird very well, even the glooming in the eye. I only like the picture a little bit darker. Cheers, Hero.

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From arkj/Abdul (2,884) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:53:12 AM CST

Thanks dear Hero for apprecaited my shot and for your kind words. This one is my second shot of same bird at same location my first post was bright and bit over saturated. So I didn't try to bright this time. Thanks again for your precious time. Best of regards. Abdul..

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from hbl/Bahadir (20,964) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:17:47 AM CST (5) Early critique

Good shot Abdul. Details are very good on the fathers. Composition, DOF, location of the bird and lighting useful are good. The eye is a bit dark. Background is clear, colors are nice. Regards.

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From arkj/Abdul (2,884) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:37:47 AM CST

Hi dear Bahadir I'm really very glad that you like the shot. Thanks for apprecaited my shot and for your kind words. Please kindly give me some tip about how to brightup some part of photo,like the bird of eye. I'll be very thankful.Thanks again for stoping by and your precious time . Best of regards. Abdul..

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from edwin/Edwin K.W. (152,417) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:12:13 AM CST (5) Early critique

Nice capture of the bird pose Abdul, good blurry background to help your subject to stand out, but I would still try to clone out those two OOF trunks in the background if possible. A little noise appearing on the bird head and I would brighten up a little bit on the bird eye for some impact.

Cheers......Edwin

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From arkj/Abdul (2,884) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:31:26 AM CST

Thanks dear Edwin for apprecaited my shot and for your kind words. I try to clone out backgrong seed plant but background become very fuzzy and then I leave it as they are. I also try to brighten up the bird eye but I failed, because I don't know how to do it. Kindly you or some other memeber of Photosig guied me about that, I'm still learing so many things. I'll be very thankful.Thanks again for your precious time. Best of regards. Abdul..

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From edwin/Edwin K.W. (152,417) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 9:00:56 AM CST

Hello Abdul, there is a lasso tool or magic wand that you may choose to use on selecting the area on the photo you want to work on, I think lasso is the better tool for the eye, you just pick the tool and then point your mouse at the starting point on the photo and then draw the line around the area until the pointer meets the starting point again. For the small eye of the bird, enlarge the photo first.

Cheers......Edwin

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From arkj/Abdul (2,884) Send mail to this user on November 8, 2009 12:35:31 AM CST

Thanks dear Edwin for you helpful tip.I just did as you said and it's works.Thanks again for your precious time.Best of regards. Abdul..

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