Lost Memories


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Title     Lost Memories
Photographer     fairweather/Stephanie (221) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Just a start
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     1/30 sec
Categories     Documentary
Emotive
Nature
Camera     Nikon D60
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 6, 2009 1:49:46 PM CST
Views     322
Rating     9 Thumb-up

1 of the photos I took at an abandoned house.

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from ulku/Hulya (45) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 6:01:04 PM CST

Like the whole idea a lot, a great expression of autumn sentiment. Thanks for sharing. Hulya

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from vaisvila/Romualdas (1,451) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 2:34:17 PM CST (3) Early critique

Hello, Stephanie; I like a nostalgic mood of this picture; to improve emotional impact, I might try to include few more random things from an abandoned house in the picture, it could work, Regards, -R

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From fairweather/Stephanie (221) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 3:51:30 PM CST

Thank you! When I go back to finish the photographs, I'll take that in mind.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from danmontero/Daniel (4,295) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 2:33:23 PM CST (3) Early critique

very nice (and sad) idea. I like specially how photo seem old and faces are dissapearing. Together with leaves, gives that sense of old memories lost. I only miss a bit more detail in shadows and maybe a not too centered position of the old photography. Thanks for sharing. Cheers

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From fairweather/Stephanie (221) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 3:50:40 PM CST

Thanks for taking a look Daniel!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from canonfavkeith/Lisa (53) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 2:11:37 PM CST (3) Early critique

Like it. Very creative. Makes me sad. The bottom left corner part looks somewhat vacant and incomplete. Add more bright colored leaves?

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From fairweather/Stephanie (221) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 3:49:41 PM CST

Thank you Lisa! If I go back soon, I'll have to try that out. =]

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from stacy81/Stacy (251) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 1:55:39 PM CST (3) Early critique

Excellent shot Stephanie, love it, the choice of background is masterfull, maybe move polaroid off center a little.

Remind me of this movie momento

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From fairweather/Stephanie (221) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 3:49:00 PM CST

Thank you Stacy! I agree with the photo being off center a bit.

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