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from faradayjones/faraday (2,418) 
on November 4, 2009 3:04:52 AM CST
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Welcome to Photosig, This image has good possibilities but there are some issues with it, at least for me. Its a little soft, so I think you may have DOF/aperture issues. Its a bit difficult to tell what point is in focus. The straps are also an issue, either too much or too little, she is a lovely woman, be nice to her, try again it'll be worth it.
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from delac/Ante (1,388)
on November 3, 2009 3:01:01 PM CST
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hi sorry for thumb down, but i think that this is bad portrait...background is bad and distracting,her hair is sharper than face and her face looks a little bit wierd...you have too much space on the top of photo, and this part of her bra in botom left corner bother, you should croped that out with this black line (well that line is because of her breasts)...and colors are little bit strange...good luck next time ;)
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from hankbenson/Hank (44,014)
on November 3, 2009 2:58:05 PM CST
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Very appealing expression and tones. Looks like the eyes have been worked on
separately (nice and sharp) and the dof doesn't quite bring in anything more, so it's soft. Left hand is awkward IMO.
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From greeter1/Administrator (0)  
on November 3, 2009 4:45:42 PM CST
A reminder that Photosig's recommendation is three conforming critiques per photo submitted. This helps Photosig achieve its goal of three critiques for every member's photos. Photosig needs members like you, on a continuing basis, to write three critiques for other members for every photo you submit. Please, can you spend some time writing critiques for other members? Thank you.
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