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from rrayfield/Robert (53,676) 
on November 3, 2009 5:32:02 AM CST
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Great mood, Hadi! A bunch of technical thinks. First, the photo is a bit flat. Try Levels at 50 - 1.17 - 255 to provide just a bit of an edge - see what you think. Second, I don't know how sharp the original image is - but I had that lens and it wasn't ever as sharp as I expected. For portraits, if you are on a budget, Canon makes a very good 50mm f/1.8. And the frame? I think I would notice the pink without it. Cheers, r
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From hadiwibawa/Hadi (113)
on November 3, 2009 5:36:08 AM CST
Thanks robert for your input.
i tried the level u suggest, yes it was better thanks
as for lens, the baby would not stand still she kept crawling around, and my studio is so small so 50mm will not cover all.
again thanks
rgds
hdw
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From rrayfield/Robert (53,676)
on November 3, 2009 5:44:54 AM CST
hmm . . . I use the Canon 17-85 IS - a fabulous lens but expensive. It took me a year to convince myself to get rid of the 18-55. (The newer Canon comes with a better lens.)
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From hadiwibawa/Hadi (113)
on November 3, 2009 6:34:09 AM CST
actualy i prefer tamron 17-50/f2.8, color tends to be yelowish, but its very sharp...
at that moment my tamron was on service center
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From rrayfield/Robert (53,676)
on November 3, 2009 6:36:37 AM CST
Ah, that's good. I am glad that you have a good lens! And the f/2.8 can be useful to soften the backgrounds. Cheers, r
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From greeter1/Administrator (0)  
on November 3, 2009 8:04:13 AM CST
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