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from joyia/Sardar Muhammad (72,279)
on July 31, 2009 10:44:02 AM CDT
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Beautiful intirior shot ..with nice control of light ..rendering all the shads of light to bring out the textures and color of the chaotic place .. your angle of view ,composition and DOF is so sweet dear Ulrich ..Yes it is choas and disorder .. lovely shot ;) best of regards.. JOYIA
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from stevepb/Steve (8,282)
on July 31, 2009 10:04:17 AM CDT
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Hello Ulrich. I think that the exposure must have been pretty tricky with this - white cat in a snowstorm type problem - and the far corner of the room shows as much detail as the nearest parts. The mysterious dark doorway is well placed to lead the viewer's thoughts to what lies beyond. That door has good leading lines and the three main splashes of colour lift the tension in the shot. I love all the textures: the bricks in the roof, the peeling wallpaper, the rubble on the floor. Nice interpretation. Steve
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from facewithered/Puchong (9,650)
on July 31, 2009 9:59:43 AM CDT
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Hello Ulirich, I like the way you left another hint, the blue triangle leading to the unfinished spacial succession upstairs so that me eyes may continue to move through the door and imagine something behind. Puchong
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from ledonna/Ledonna (679)
on July 31, 2009 9:48:36 AM CDT
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This very much fits with chaos and disorder. I really don't like the white boarder around this though. It takes away from the white chaos going on inside the photo. Once that's gone there might be a little bit of contrast to tweak. I like the composition, texture and the little bits of color that are hinted beneath the paint.
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