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People 1

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Title     People 1
Photographer     irshazar/Shaghayegh (9) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     People
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     1/60 sec
Category     Portrait
Lens     18-55
Camera     Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     July 20, 2009 7:50:16 AM CDT
Views     431
Rating     6 Thumb-up

One of my very first portrait shots

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from bijanb/Bijan (2,738) Send mail to this user on July 22, 2009 6:01:41 PM CDT (0) Early critique

Salam,well first of all this portrait is bit unusual but i like it.B/w fits and also the high iso.Andalso the Pose is a bit strange,but else a good Start in Portrait.hope to see more of your works,portraits of poeple.bijan

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mickie31/Mickie (2,995) Send mail to this user on July 20, 2009 8:47:43 AM CDT (1) Early critique

This portrait is quite interesting and unusual. Your model's expression and posture make it worth watching. I think you could crop a bit of the top to make her more present. Good work

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from trevoux/Pierre (1,348) Send mail to this user on July 20, 2009 8:03:30 AM CDT (3) Early critique

Very nice portrait. The facial expression of your beautiful model is excellent. Good pose and good lighting. I like the grainy finish. In my humble opinion the cropping would be better if the right edge dit not 'cut ' the arm at the joint and was slided more on the left. Thank you for sharing. Pierre

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From greta/Administrator (0) This user is a Premium Member This user is an Administrator Send mail to this user on July 20, 2009 6:50:36 PM CDT

Welcome to photoSIG.

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This is a great community. First of all, you can get feedback on your own images. But it is also a wonderful way to help you improve your photography, by analyzing pictures and giving critical feedback to others. This will help you grow as a photographer, as well as improve your skills. An added benefit of giving critical feedback to others is that it helps you learn how to evaluate your own photos.

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