7166 Window


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Title     7166 Window
Photographer     wolli/Ian (57,364) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Abstract, architecture & others
F-stop     f/16
Shutter speed     1/125 sec
Category     Abstract
Filter     UV
Lens     Sigma 17-70mm f2.8-4.5 DC Macro
Camera     Pentax *ist D
Format     6.1 mp RAW format, 1.5X lens factor
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 16, 2009 3:03:08 AM CDT
Views     417
Rating     3 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mpj/Jonathon (1,795) Send mail to this user on June 22, 2009 8:52:43 PM CDT (1) Early critique

Hi Ian:

I like Pilot's suggestion. Another presentation would be to add negative space - i.e. place the window on a third-point in the frame with lots of blank wall around. Would add to the starkness of the image. As it is, still very effective.

Cheers, MPJ

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From wolli/Ian (57,364) Send mail to this user on June 22, 2009 8:57:45 PM CDT

Thanks Johnathon. I think I took a shot like that. Regards, Ian.

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Thumb-up    from pilotlee/Pilot (25,515) Send mail to this user on May 16, 2009 5:41:57 AM CDT (2) Early critique

lan, for my point, I would crop off the "window" into two halves by the middle line. Either side would be wodderful and appreciable with its lines, shadows and the white spaces. I would convert them, or either, into a square format. Just for yoou reference.

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From wolli/Ian (57,364) Send mail to this user on May 16, 2009 6:31:37 AM CDT

Hadn't thought of that. Thanks Pilot. Regards, Ian.

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