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from wildaho/Wade (3,286) 
on March 6, 2009 2:18:54 AM CST
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Composition is very good... (maybe crop just a touch off the top?)
But I have some problems with the overall yellow tinge. It's all well and good but somehow, I think these flowers are white, or, if they are yellow, they are not the same yellow as the background.
The textures are interesting. especially in the background. Is it Bokah or is it PhotoShop? I vote for the latter.
Overall, it's just a bit TOO yellow (orange) for me. Either do this one in B&W to preserve the tones, or back off on the color.
Just my opinion...
Wade
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From tutmos/Ali (1,638)
on March 6, 2009 4:30:20 AM CST
THANK YOU very much for your useful comment.flowers Are yellow this is photoshop and their plugin works.i will try BW too thx again !
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from ursusarctos/Philippe (2,129)
on March 5, 2009 4:38:04 AM CST
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Hi Ali, A very nice shot. For me the sharpness is good. It can be seen on each flower (except the one in the middle)and on the heart. The bokeh in the background is beautiful as the colors. The aperture of f/4 is a good choice to isolate the main subject. So, good framing, good exposure, sharpness where it must be, for a beautiful final result. Congratulations. Phil
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from sangekarmehul/Mehul (200)
on March 5, 2009 4:34:41 AM CST
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Hi Ali, it is a great composition and the colors are wonderful. I agree about the sharpness though. Thanks. Mehul
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From tutmos/Ali (1,638)
on March 5, 2009 3:34:31 PM CST
thank you very much for your commenttttttttt
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from jmrosz/Jan (109,508)
on March 5, 2009 4:11:18 AM CST
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The colours are great, therefore the lighting was good. The composition lookes nice too. But the sharpness is to bad, that's a pity. Use a higher F-stop at macro..
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From tutmos/Ali (1,638)
on March 5, 2009 3:33:00 PM CST
thank you very much for your commenttttt
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from neutrino64/Roberto (215)
on March 5, 2009 3:32:41 AM CST
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good subject, but really poor contrast. I don't know if this picture has been postprocessed, but the flower in the foreground needs to be detached from the background.
I have no reason to, but I think to that flower as a white flower.
Hope this helps.
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From tutmos/Ali (1,638)
on March 5, 2009 3:32:27 PM CST
i m happy thank you very much for your comment
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From log/Louise (24,553) 
on March 5, 2009 4:45:29 PM CST
I wonder... do you actually read the comments/critiques?
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