the dance studio


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Title     the dance studio
Photographer     martynb/Martyn (8,292) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     movement
Category     Expression
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     January 20, 2009 6:38:07 PM CST
Views     856
Rating     1 Thumb-up

a dancer being put through her paces,comments welcome, cheers martyn

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Thumb-up    from mood/Gheorghiu (453) Send mail to this user on January 21, 2009 1:41:38 AM CST (1) Early critique

I`m waiting more of this, it is known that the dancers are among most expressive persons and for a photographer it is a real pleasure to work with them.

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Thumb-up    from jmrosz/Jan (204,231) Send mail to this user on January 21, 2009 1:21:37 AM CST (1) Early critique

I like the move in the picture, it's dance. The sharpness could be a bit better. The pose lookes good. It's a pity, that the background is a bit disturbing.

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Thumb-down    from stevenwc/Steven (32,353) Send mail to this user on January 20, 2009 7:31:51 PM CST (8) Early critique

I suppose you intentionally blurred this but it does not work for me. What I do like is how you got her entire body in the shot. However, I think it would have worked if she had been in focus so we can study her facial expressions and intensity in her face on this move. . ALso, looks like the right side is slanting downward

I left another critique on one of your older photos that is similar that I liked much better and explained there what I liked about it compared to this one. Here the whole pic seems blurred where on the other one there seemed to be different grades of blurriness that actually showed action and was very good. I found it missing on this shot. The other one seemed graceful, here it looks like she is about to fall backwards

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