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from ebn50/Evan (10,991) 
on September 22, 2008 9:53:05 AM CDT
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Yes, the play on lines, light and reflections are well seen here. I would never have thought of a crop like this so you composition is steller and imaginative. And Richard Wright is playing that big gig in the sky, RIP.
Evan
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From night/Bartek (11,927)
on September 22, 2008 10:07:45 AM CDT
Thank You Evan very much. I was just trying to create composition which will use Beksinski's art, but will not be simple photo of it. Hope I managed to do it:) Yes, he is. Hope to hear him someday:) Best regards, Bartek
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from arturdy/Artur (40,359)
on September 19, 2008 5:31:49 PM CDT
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Hi, Bartek:)! This photo is really good: simple and effective, with gentle, but visible and strong "working" details. All of them carefully and exactly placed, "smudges" of the Beksinski's paint contrasting with whiteness - really good idea:)! Rgds, Artur
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from lumapluma/Andrea (15,959)
on September 19, 2008 4:38:22 AM CDT
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Hi Bartek
The quotation of the Dark Side of the Moon's prism is great
I suggest to crop a little to the right just to have the leaf starting from the fram avoiding that brown stripe. Beautiful compo indeed
Thanks for sharing
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From night/Bartek (11,927)
on September 19, 2008 9:59:40 AM CDT
Hi Andrea. Thank You for the prism. I havenever thought about it. Yes, now i find it much better tribute. Thanks:) Best regards, Bartek
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from drbob/Robert (drbob) (23,946) 
on September 17, 2008 8:53:05 PM CDT
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I find it fascinating that this photo, which is a photo of someone elses art, is being critiqued by two high rollers (not meant to be derogatory) on PhotoSig. And they've one well as far as my knowledge goes. We will all miss Richard. The painting is wonderful and you're interpretation is great. Thank you.
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from wolli/Ian (56,879)
on September 17, 2008 3:42:47 PM CDT
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Not showing the whole here has resulted in more (less is more) Bartek. This carefully constructed, simple composition is extremely effective with the left side balancing the painting on the right. A particularly interesting aspect is the triangles of light in the bottom left. Regards, Ian.
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From night/Bartek (11,927)
on September 19, 2008 9:24:08 AM CDT
Thank You Ian very much, great to see You again. Best regards, Bartek
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from jaypi/Jay (40,782)
on September 17, 2008 11:17:30 AM CDT
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The repetition of frames, in blacks and in whites, is very interesting. It creates a complex image of echos and relations. And then there are those triangular "fans" of highlights on one side and of darks on the other. And maybe the dark stripe on the right edge can be cropped out to leave that side as open as the opposite one. Very interesting indeed.
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From night/Bartek (11,927)
on September 19, 2008 9:20:17 AM CDT
Thank You Jay. I find this stripe distracting, but suprisingly I didn't thought about cropping it. Best regards, Bartek
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