laundry day


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Title     laundry day
Photographer     kemalaksel/M.Kemal (6,403) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     general
Category     Street Photography
Lens     Nikon AF S VR 70-200/2.8 G IF-ED
Camera     Nikon D2X
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     February 15, 2008 1:21:57 PM CST
Views     893
Rating     18 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from waramiral/Mehmet (23) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on September 23, 2008 6:54:55 AM CDT (1)

Hi Kemal I almost looked all of your photos. In my opinion the best is that one. Perfect framing, excellent contrasted colors. Furthermore the two 'Nazar Boncugu' dramatises the photo very nice. Best regards...

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from asahin/Ayfer (338) Send mail to this user on February 17, 2008 1:09:34 PM CST (3)

Hi, I definitely agree with the previous critique, It sums up everything about your shout. Maybe I can add that it's so cute to see two "nazar boncugu" both sides on the wall :) Great shot... Keep it up! Good day Ayfer.

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From kemalaksel/M.Kemal (6,403) Send mail to this user on February 17, 2008 1:28:56 PM CST

thanks dear

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from acampos/Andres (51,987) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 2:29:10 PM CST (7)

Hello Kemal.

A mundane scene bring it to art life. I love the contrast of the clothes against the wall. Beautiful display indeed. Rich in colors and textures. The balance is perfect. The negative space at the bottom work very well to bring a pleasant view to our eyes.

Alignment of the vertical lines is perfect. The horizontal border of the window is aligned as well. But not the upper edge of the window. A small imperfection but very visible in the space at the wall between the window and the top edge of the picture. However it will be very easy to fix with the Crop tool with perspective correction (PS).

A great addition is the pair of eyes. One of each sides of the window. I agree with the previous critiques about the space between each eye and the border. Fortunately, there is PS and you can add a proportional area at the right pretty easily.

Best - Andres.

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from za3balawy/Amr (344) Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 2:10:21 PM CST

nice vision

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from antero69/Markus (6,194) Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 2:02:12 PM CST (7)

Hallo, very creative photo. I like the color combination of the laundry. Very nice DOF and very crisp. Nice crop. Thank you for sharing, Markus

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from limiteded/Ed (2,391) Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 1:51:56 PM CST (6) Early critique

I agree with all the positives of the previous critiques. It's a wonderful vision, as it is. It could be even better if the opening were perfectly aligned with the crop and the two blue-and-white objects were equidistant from the sides of the crop. That small wish is not enough to reduce the three thumbs-up!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from photobilly/Bill (1,223) Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 1:41:50 PM CST (5) Early critique

Very nice. Good eye to see this kind of composition. Nice array of colors and the detail is sharp and contrasty. This would be nice framed and on the wall. Thanks for sharing......bill......

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from stouty/Peter (230) Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 1:40:10 PM CST (8) Early critique

Hi kemal. Nicely framed, well spotted. The composition is quite appealing. I was wondering if taking the shot a little lower may have cut out the chair-top, but then i guess you would have the underside of the basket which would not be so good?.
Nice shot, Cok Guzel!
Peter

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From tyafi/Talal (6,009) Send mail to this user on February 15, 2008 2:09:16 PM CST

Herllow Kemal, You make photography very difficult when we do not have the eye, this is fantastic and whatever else similar

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