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from hstiver/Harold (5,704) 
on February 13, 2008 5:18:00 PM CST
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Nicely done, John
Your stiching looks pretty seamless except for some lighting changes on the right side.
Very colorful. I would like to see it in a print, I don't think web sized images can do justice to panorama shots.
Well done, Harold
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From johngoyer/John (84,201) 
on February 13, 2008 9:37:37 PM CST
Hi Harold - I need to go back and shoot this better with a wider lens - I started the pano on the building on the right, and went CCW adding the bridge at the last moment - and the light in the sky changed too much during those 10 shots - nice area though! (and it does look better bigger!) John
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from carolee/Carole (30,795)
on February 8, 2008 7:19:59 PM CST
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Hmm the dark parts in the sky don't bother me a bit. I love the bridge and the sharpness and detail are great. I agree about cropping out the electrical thingy's, the end of the left most building seems like a more natural break. The reflections here make this shot a joy to veiw. Carole
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From johngoyer/John (84,201)
on February 13, 2008 9:36:03 PM CST
good idea on the left crop - next time I'm in town, I'll try this again, and see if i can get it all right! John
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from n1r0t/Torin (3,779)
on February 8, 2008 2:31:11 PM CST
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Very nice work here John. Exposure is excellent. First thing that jumped out though were the power lines on the left. I'd crop those out unless you specifically wanted them. The reflections on the water are very nice and probably my favorite part of the image. I also agree with the previous reviewer about the sky. Perhaps judicious use of the healing brush in photoshop or some cloning could even out the sky a bit. I'm sure it's also made worse by the jpeg compression. Thanks for sharing!
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From johngoyer/John (84,201)
on February 8, 2008 9:44:33 PM CST
Hi Torin - I think you're right about the power lines - and as far as the sky, rather than play more with this, i'll try to shoot it correctly next time - thanks for looking! John
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from mbiasion/Enrico (9,569)
on February 8, 2008 1:35:08 PM CST
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Hi John, the technical side is perfect and near to the flawless: the exposure is well managed and show a lot of details without burned areas. The colors are also well balanced, with a good saturation and a brilliant look. What I don't like is the distracting element on the left side (electric "buildings") and the effect in the sky, on the right is visible a "dark effect" that remind me that this is a ten picture's panorama. However, the entire effect is pleasant but... I prefer Frisco's view :) Best regards, Enrico
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From johngoyer/John (84,201)
on February 8, 2008 1:56:44 PM CST
Hi Enrico - that dark effect I tried to minimize, but I guess I really need to shoot this over - I thought it was pleasant though as you say, and figured it was worth a post for comments - thanks! (I prefer SF too!) John
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