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Dawn

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Title     Dawn
Photographer     holdit/Art (3,517) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     D80 wide
F-stop     f/22
Shutter speed     4 sec
Categories     Landscape
Sea and Sand
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     December 1, 2007 7:19:44 AM CST
Views     508
Rating     5 Thumb-up

Another dawn from Sydney. All suggestions welcome, thanks.

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Thumb-up    from stevendesiow/Steven (2,145) Send mail to this user on December 1, 2007 9:29:07 AM CST (2)

Good composition, perspective and good detail of the foreground. 4 sec did very well to the water. But pity the sky is lacking something. Also the far end rock looks a bit strange, especially the black line like drawing.

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Thumb-up    from henroben/Ben (1,871) Send mail to this user on December 1, 2007 7:41:09 AM CST (3) Early critique

I like the comp but I think you need to go back and reprocess this one. I'm not sure what you've done but the headland in the background looks like it's been cut out with a pair of scissors, with a noticeable black line around it. Also looks a bit flat compaired with the rest of the shot.

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Thumb-up    from fabian9/Fabian (3,001) Send mail to this user on December 1, 2007 7:35:04 AM CST (3) Early critique

Hi Art,
good composition and nice mood! however the photo looks horribly oversharpened... the edges are very rough, especially where the water hits the rocks on the right side of the photo. and also in the top left corner of the photo. But really like the composition and colors.
Thanks for sharing, Fabian

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from zoob/Etai (1,332) Send mail to this user on December 1, 2007 7:26:45 AM CST

very nice picture...i c alot of mystery in it...

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from licanian/Cosma (757) Send mail to this user on December 1, 2007 7:26:34 AM CST (2) Early critique

Beautiful picture ! I like the blue tones of the sea in contrast with the dark rocks ! A rough place like Ireland ... Good job !!!

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