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from morningfrost/Silvio (22,661)  
on July 30, 2007 12:38:50 PM CDT
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Yes, the frame is a bit too wide. This picture is good enough even without it. There is little else that you can improve, maybe just a slight desaturation of the background.
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From redu/Omer (2,550)
on July 31, 2007 9:53:30 AM CDT
Thank you very much Silvio for your kind critique.
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from lanebleess/Lane (1,913)
on July 30, 2007 3:53:32 AM CDT
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Everything about the girl is perfect. Exposure, posing and composition is wonderful.
The pink bike (since it is out of focus) is also ok, but having the person behind her in not good at all.
The color choice on your frame is complimentary, but it is much too large. Having that much color around the frame alters the eye's rendition of the images whites and skin tones, making them appear to be a different (and not very pleasing) color.
I also like the reflections in her eyes. Nice photo!
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From redu/Omer (2,550)
on July 30, 2007 4:23:30 AM CDT
Lane thank you very much for your critic. I have to agree about the frame. Actually the idea was to make the thumbnail maximum size by chosing a square format so that it draws more attention... But yes along with the first critic you're right and i have to do something about it the next time. Thanks for your time.
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from brokenviolin/William (5,975)
on July 29, 2007 5:46:17 PM CDT
(4)
Good color and use of available light. The expression is perfect. Would be very good if you had a cleaner background.
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From redu/Omer (2,550)
on July 29, 2007 6:15:57 PM CDT
Thank you William very much. Yes the bkg is a problem here. :)
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from stevenparrott/Steve (1,232)
on July 29, 2007 5:45:05 PM CDT
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Cute girl, but the lady in the background ruins this. I also do not like the frame. The centered photo just looks out of place and proportion. Try cutting the top of the frame so that it is sized the same as the framing on the sides of the photo. The photo will then be in a "gallery" position and look much better. I do really like the coloring on this. It almost looks like a faint watercolor effect... could be because it is a film scan... still I like it.
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From redu/Omer (2,550)
on July 29, 2007 6:14:40 PM CDT
Thank you very much for your recommendations Steve.
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