Too Bound To Fly


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Title     Too Bound To Fly
Photographer     ebenammat/Eben (2,382) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Holy, Holy, Holy!
Category     Recycled Art
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     March 31, 2007 12:15:30 PM CDT
Views     255
Rating     1 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from alex10/Alessandro (3,150) Send mail to this user on March 31, 2007 12:28:50 PM CDT (2) Early critique

Nice photo, Eben, a little penalyzed by this flat sky. Moreover, I suggest to follow a different approach about the composition. The result could be improved, in my opinion, cutting out of the scene the background of the city. Another different approach could be to "contextualize" the image, giving more importance to the city: in both cases changing the point of view. You could also try to let out the light on the left, a little distracting. Best regards, Alessandro

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