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Abstract #1

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Title     Abstract #1
Photographer     motumboe/Marco (3,367) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Abstract
F-stop     f/22
Shutter speed     15 sec
Category     Abstract
Lens     Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 Mk II
Camera     Canon EOS 350D
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     October 2, 2006 3:41:54 PM CDT
Views     372
Rating     1 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from tvernuccio/Sheila (37,104) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 3, 2006 12:21:32 AM CDT (1) Early critique

hi Marco, i like these kind of long exposure shots! all the the wiggly lines intrigue me. :) the bright colors are pleasing, but i think they'd look so much better if you increase the contrast in the shadows which would make the lines and colors pop more. try it and watch how the green and blue streaks in the top jump out better, as well as that red in the lower right.

composition is busy and my eye wanders around a lot...not really settling. might look good to try cropping some off the right and left, making a square crop.

nice job. :) Cheers! sheila

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From motumboe/Marco (3,367) Send mail to this user on October 3, 2006 2:38:16 AM CDT

Thank you Sheila :-)

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