longing


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Title     longing
Photographer     tomb/Tom (3,438) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Portfolio
Category     Emotive
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     August 15, 2006 10:50:04 AM CDT
Views     2,521
Rating     15 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from rgrat/Robert (727) Send mail to this user on August 16, 2006 7:26:39 AM CDT (2)

Great shot Tom. I love the background and the fact that you are able to show her as if she is just standing on water. To me though, it looks like the type of photo relating to something heavenly. If she was made up to look like an angel would work better. Just my sudgestion. Thanks for sharring.

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From tomb/Tom (3,438) Send mail to this user on August 16, 2006 10:29:05 AM CDT

Sorry Robert, I don't believe much in angels... Maybe a bomb belt around her waist could get some thoughts flying ? TomB.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from bryan8k9/Bryan (5,241) Send mail to this user on August 16, 2006 2:56:16 AM CDT (2)

I think you caught the feeling here. This is certainly an wierd interesting, different and emotive photo and works well as a metaphor. The sky isnt that great compared to the rest. I may have liked her to be dead center and have less sky. Well done.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from arturdy/Artur (38,702) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 2:28:20 PM CDT (3)

Very interesting, anything mysterious photo. Central position of Model and symethry between sky and water play good. Pastel colours of background give in opposition to Model quite interesting space. Rgds, Artur

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Thumb-up    from rjuierie/Rohan (337) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 1:04:50 PM CDT (2)

beautiful work. what can i say about it? For me its a perfect balance of contrasts, like Black and white, Yin and yang, Reality and illusion...I hope you get what i'm saying.....Cheers.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from leren/Luc (31,302) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 12:46:06 PM CDT (4)

Hi Tom, beautiful work, but that you already knew :) I wondered why you did not bring her in the exact center of the vertical and the horizontal. I mean, a little more to the left and a little higher. The feeling of 'too much sky' does add to the longing, indeed. The pink 'smoke screen' is strange. Her dark feet... boots? Though she longs, she's perfectly planted in the ground... not floating... heavy... Yes, longing can sometimes be like that. Take care. Luc

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Thumb-up    from herwig/Herwig (1,114) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 11:03:11 AM CDT (6) Early critique

This gives me a very good feeling. Eerie colors, nice pose. Well done.

On the other hand ... where is the horizon? My eyes keep searching and I think it has been PSed away, hasn't it? Looking closed, I can make out some VERY similar structures in the waters which leads me to the conclusion that u used the stamp tool here excessively, right? The background doesn't seem to be right that way ...

Hope this helps,
Herwig

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from chrisa2005/Chris (744) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 11:01:50 AM CDT (5) Early critique

Cracking picture, Can easily see it on the wall. Just wondering if it is one shot or if you manipulated in some way. Either way great image.

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From tomb/Tom (3,438) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 11:14:57 AM CDT

Well, to all of you: my motto is not to simply take pictures, but to make them. This is actually just one shot, but has been worked on. The horizon has been clones away and I see it might need som more work. Thanks.

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From ssgambati/Stefano (674) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 11:43:10 AM CDT

Looks like a work by Scott Mutter... do you know him? You should definitely check out his work.

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From dickhiggins/Dick (640) Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 10:45:12 PM CDT

Don't you think Mutter's stuff relies on more 'fantasy' than is evident here - more juxtaposing elements for effect? He uses black and white to emphasize his imagery ... the color here, I think, softens the image and bases it more in reality?

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From tomb/Tom (3,438) Send mail to this user on August 16, 2006 3:47:21 PM CDT

Try this guy http://www.arnesamuelsen.no/galleri/ Him and Rene Magritte are my main sources of inspiration. Thanks for the interest ! TomB.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from gbzee/George (13,931) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on August 15, 2006 10:53:13 AM CDT (5) Early critique

Nice striking image. For me this is a good case for keeping the subject centered in the frame...it really gives the feeling of solitude. I like the over all color balance and the reflection of the subject adds interest.
Well Done.
Regards
-george

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From redu/Omer (2,296) Send mail to this user on August 16, 2006 8:08:38 AM CDT

This can be nothing but a Japanese horror movie poster. Imagine the name of the movie in bold on the top and cast and crew in small letters in the bottom and the slogan on left or right "SHE NEVER SLEEPS". Creepy.

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