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from foamx/Lawrence (1,287)
on July 9, 2006 10:34:24 AM CDT
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this is a great scene. the image could be improved by some additional dodging and burning. Perhaps it's my powerbook display but the whole thing seems a bit flat. Some dodging of the lighter toned water in the mid foreground would make the shoreline seems so much more imposing.
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From maxart/Max (81,757)
on July 9, 2006 11:01:37 AM CDT
Yep it is a bit flat, cheers Lawrence. ;o)-max-
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from bratman/Bratman (13,463)
on July 9, 2006 10:29:55 AM CDT
Hi Max...Assuming this is from your trip to the Faroes? Like the hanging cloud cover (though I may have panicked a bit if landing to shoot the birds :) Tones are good and composition is fine. Reminds me of my great regret at not photographing some of the islands on my recent trip...should have done that. I expect this image means a lot to you. Best, Brat.
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From maxart/Max (81,757)
on July 9, 2006 11:00:55 AM CDT
It was kind of magical walking around in the fog and suddently having small moments of clear sky and sun, and then again a few steps later all white and only the sound of birds. Love the place. ;o)-max-
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from niceman/Christoph (3,095)
on July 9, 2006 10:22:43 AM CDT
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The motif is really good and the monochrome style fits well. Only thing I would have changed is the border - I think a small 1pt-black line would have been better in this case - the large white area around is good as it is.
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From maxart/Max (81,757)
on July 9, 2006 10:57:51 AM CDT
I use a standart frame for 95% of my images, it is easier that way, but you may be right a hairline or no border might have been better. Cheers Christoph ;o)-max-
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