Main
Photos
Articles
Reviews
Forums
Users
mySIG
Photos  Photo Critiques  Submit Photo  New Date  Search  Help 
Sign In

Windows abstract

You are viewing a reduced-resolution thumbnail. You must have an account and be signed in to view photos greater than 72 hours old.

Photo

Title     Windows abstract
Photographer     bcollet/Bertrand (1,070) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Black and White
Categories     Abstract
Architecture
Black and White
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     June 25, 2006 3:34:37 PM CDT
Views     201
Rating     4 Thumb-up

Critiques

This photo currently has 2 conforming critiques. If you write one of the first three conforming critiques for this photo, then you will receive three critique points every time another user rates your critique helpful.

Write a critique

If you find one of these critiques especially helpful--or especially unhelpful--then please take a moment to register your opinion by clicking one of the buttons to the right of the critique.

Show newest first    Show most helpful first
Show oldest first    Show least helpful first

Thumb-up Thumb-up    from deleted269103/deleted (458) Send mail to this user on August 26, 2008 3:30:18 PM CDT (0) Early critique

This is an interesting shot. I like the composition and the details in the photograph. The diagonal line in the center is very nice, but overall, the tilt to the image is distracting. The line at the top adds little to the image and could be cropped out. If you can reshoot - would it be possible to shoot from an angle that would eliminate the tilt?

Nice work!
Varina Patel

Reply  Show ratings 

Thumb-up Thumb-up    from wolli/Ian (57,016) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on June 25, 2006 4:19:14 PM CDT (1) Early critique

The digonal lines are quite disorienting Bertrand producing an unstable feeling. I'm not sure what that is creeping in at the top but I think the photo would probably be better off without it. Regards, Ian.

Reply  Show ratings 

Comments

Comments are different from critiques. Comments carry no rating, you may write more than one comment per photo, and you may comment on your own photos. If you want to rate this photo, then you should write a critique instead.

Add a comment

There are no comments on this photo.

Return to photos