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from mccary/Joe (3,405) 
on June 13, 2006 1:44:51 AM CDT
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I don't shoot weddings but to me the window is distracting, too many vertical bars that stop the flow. Maybe cropped tighter so you had just a single pane opening and moved the bride closer and turned her slightly to the right so we saw more of her front...
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from mikestephens/Mike (50,170) 
on June 12, 2006 11:27:48 PM CDT
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I may have cropped a very small slice off the right as the black kinda predominates and distracts my eye from the bride here. The veil hiding the lower portion of her face detracts a small amount. While the red roses look beautiful here, I'd consider going b/w or sepia. Just a thought!
mike s~~
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from sergiobelcamine/Serge (1,728)
on June 12, 2006 11:14:31 PM CDT
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I think I would go vertical with this shot. That would remove the black part on the right that doesn't add anything to the pic. Also, I would try boosting up the contrast a bit. Not too much. I tried all these improvement with your shot in PS and I think it gives it more punch. I don't mean to tell you that I would be better at it, I'm just sharing my thought on it. Hope you appreciate it and it didn't offend you. Friendly!
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From sgreath/Steven (954)
on June 12, 2006 11:22:18 PM CDT
I definitely appreciate your suggestions...I'll give that a shot.
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