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from emnemaz/E (2)  
on June 5, 2006 9:34:01 AM CDT
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Really superb, Jacek. Maybe a little too dark on the right side of the face. But then, again, I probably wouldn't change it. I just wish I had taken this photo. Ed.
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from deleted135034/deleted (782)
on June 5, 2006 5:59:56 AM CDT
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simply loverly. I love the glow in her eyes and the matching colors on the leaves. I think the skintexture is spot on, seems like a very real portrait to me.
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from trambi/Rafa (32)
on June 4, 2006 5:53:50 PM CDT
cześć jacek. muszę ci przyznać że ta fotka zrobiła na mnie wrażenie . super ci wyszła. Dobra oprawa w ps i efekt widać i przede wszystkim ta wyrazistość oka
Super fotka, więcej takich. Pozdrawiam Rafał
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From soplica/Jacek (56)
on June 5, 2006 1:07:04 AM CDT
Dzieki Rafal. Jednak na przyszlosc bylbym wdzieczny za komnetarz w jezyku angielskim. Pozdrawiam, Jacek
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From trambi/Rafa (32)
on June 9, 2006 11:33:13 AM CDT
no problem. you speak and you have :)))
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from crdome/Crdome (3,369)
on June 4, 2006 4:14:08 PM CDT
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Beautifully done, stimulating image with unanticipated composition. The hues and values shared by the model and flora work marvelously in the well thought out and professionally presentation. Everything is flawless, except the intense light on her nose. With this fabulous composition, the occurrence of that hotspot at the edge of the frame intensifies the discrepancy, especially when contrasted to the lighting on the left. I seldom see portraits of this compositionally quality and really wished to award a 3TU, but the lighting is a killer. Congratulation for this great shot. - Chrome
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from antonoglou/Michael (1,982)
on June 4, 2006 4:05:34 PM CDT
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The colors and tonality is great. Especially the color of eye suits so well with the leafs at the left. I like so much the shadows that gives a "dark feeling" to the image and a mood that makes an artwork and not another snapshot ! Great work, I would be very happy if you can view my photos, as we have some really common things in the way we present out themes. Greetings from Greece - Michael
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from pierre79/Piotr (1,082)
on June 4, 2006 3:34:43 PM CDT
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Hi Jack! Great work! This eye is amazing!! :)
Beautiful tones, nice croping, but too less lips, too much upper part of nose. Good skin corrections, maybe the nose is too red.
I'd mask the second plan - bright places are a little distracting.
2,7 TU :)
pozdro i nareszcie na sigu. :)
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from jameshays/James (1,841)
on June 4, 2006 12:54:06 PM CDT
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This is great. The color harmony is very well done as is the elements of contrast. The touch of white at the top and bottom of the image gives it nice balance. The eye work is great, perhaps a little hot on the white right side of the eye. Nice job.
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from carey/Carey (3,095)
on June 4, 2006 10:34:50 AM CDT
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I absolutley love this shot...I miss the lips though, the hard crop is fantastic but IMO would love to see the entire bottom lip sliced vertically is fine...thats a nit pick though...great range and a wonderful fall(ish) image.
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from shinoda/Konrad (1,003)
on June 4, 2006 10:29:21 AM CDT
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I really like the softness of her skin and sharpness of her eye. this composition is really nice and crop works wery well. Colors exactly mean that she's an autumn Aga. Pozdrawiam (Twoja fotomodelke rowniez;)
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from uneekfish/Harl (6,739)
on June 4, 2006 10:20:56 AM CDT
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Fantastic! Please post a copy of the original, or a before and after side by side in one photo. I am very interested in post process and would love to see them, and any notes / steps used to accomplish this.
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From soplica/Jacek (56)
on June 4, 2006 1:19:13 PM CDT
Hi Harl. Maybe I'll do that. Then you will know how it looks on the beginning. Who knows maybe I will create some small tutorial too :) Thank you for your voice.
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From uneekfish/Harl (6,739)
on June 4, 2006 3:56:49 PM CDT
Well if you do please e-mail me and let me know - I would hate to miss it!
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from rod/Rod (6,898)
on June 4, 2006 10:02:50 AM CDT
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Jacek, I had this similar idea last fall, got the kids to get some leaves and was going to do something like this, but then I got sidetracked. Your capture is superb. The tones of the leaves complement her skin tones as well. I like your composition. My only suggestion would be to clone out the white collar on the bottom. The knitted toque(sp?) is fine. Well done!
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from chipnova/Hip (2,587)
on June 4, 2006 10:00:29 AM CDT
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Love this photograph. The tones works well with each other. The bit of the white cap adds the needed balance for this photograph. Also love the contrast between the smooth skin of the model verses the hardness of the leaf. This photograph seems to beg though to be in B&W.
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From soplica/Jacek (56)
on June 4, 2006 1:10:00 PM CDT
Thank you. As a matter of fact I have B&W version. Maybe I will post it later. Regards
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from tanik/Tankred (7,939)
on June 4, 2006 9:50:51 AM CDT
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Hi Jacek, excelent works. The contrast on the face and betwen face and wool its perfect, the eye its in best place on this photo, great composition. regards.
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from aroadman/Angela (957)
on June 4, 2006 9:47:09 AM CDT
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Jacek, Beautiful model, i love the light and you have quite captured her subtle smirk. I like the composition as well. The ONLY thing I see is the leaf may be a little distracting that close to her eye.. ... Maybe if it was slightly lower. i could be wrong and it is just my opinion. That being said I really like the photo a lot. It caught my eye as a thumbnail and I certainly was not disapointed!
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From soplica/Jacek (56)
on June 4, 2006 12:50:48 PM CDT
Thank you kindly. I'm glad that you like it. Maybe you right with this leaf Next time I'll cut all distracting leafs, branches etc. :) Thanks for a tip.
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From gesah625/Przemek (0)
on June 4, 2006 10:02:02 AM CDT
beautifull, wanna see more! congratulations!
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From ryglos/Dawid Rafal (63)
on June 4, 2006 7:09:58 PM CDT
Jestem pod wrazeniem, polaczenie kolorow, swietny kadr, ostre i w ogole :) Jestes pierwsza osoba ktora odwiedzam na tym portalu i pewnie nie ostatni raz tu zawitalem. :) pzdr Dawid
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