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from saniok/Alexander (495)
on June 22, 2006 6:44:10 PM CDT
Excelent photo for a snapshot.. I think, that this woman got the photo with pleasure, but this photo is not for a public presentation. I got a positive emotion when look on it.
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from suchit/Suchit (24,472)
on March 30, 2006 5:49:46 AM CST
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Ok, we get it - you got her by surprise. Beyond that what?
Her hair is messed up probably from some motion, her expression is mid-way and not very pleasing, the crop is too lose on the right side with the bright area attracting attention. Not sure what you want to present here as its not even a humourous category.
~ Suchit
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from oldpan/Andrea (2,282)
on March 30, 2006 5:30:59 AM CST
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Hi Silvio, i like the beautiful expression its a funny portrait. Good definition and good bild scene. The shodows and the light aren't not good definition, but i think that you have created a good work
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from matinho/Matevz (1,307)
on March 30, 2006 3:43:52 AM CST
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Well... i agree... its a funny portrait and nothing else. I like the colours, could live with the composition. But there are other problems...I bet woman won't be too happy to see her on the photo. Yes i know, wrinkles are natural, but still, here its a bit unflattering. Also her hair cover a part of her face, on the left side, and that "contact" of hair with the mouth is not really nice. My suggestion, try again if possible. Or the next time, be a bit more a more cautius and use better momemnt to take photo. And other thing... close aperture a bit. f/2 is very shallow and needs a really careful use. OK, i know, light was very weak...
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from radek/Radoslaw (14,466)
on March 30, 2006 2:49:48 AM CST
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I am not sure... from one side funny portrait, from the other side not so good quality, not so good composition, not so good light...I think, you could do it much better. Regards, Radek.
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