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Tranquility

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Title     Tranquility
Photographer     soflasteve/Steve (17,740) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Landscapes
Categories     Abstract
Sea and Sand
Underwater
Lens     leica
Camera     Panasonic Lumix DMC FZ20
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     March 7, 2006 11:01:11 PM CST
Views     404
Rating     5 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypi/Jay (40,783) Send mail to this user on March 8, 2006 10:12:05 AM CST (5) Early critique

Beautiful geometries of rough rigid darks on silky soft blues. This one calls for a series...

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From soflasteve/Steve (17,740) Send mail to this user on March 8, 2006 10:22:11 AM CST

:) Thanks Jay. Steve

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from gian87/Marta (57,486) Send mail to this user on March 7, 2006 11:23:16 PM CST (7) Early critique

A vey nice tranquility seascape abstract Steve. I agree with the low angle for creating more depth but anyway I like this image in colors,almost minimalistic with the stone in the water,your shade and reflections. Very pleasant and nothing bothers for me. well done! best regards,Marta:_))

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From soflasteve/Steve (17,740) Send mail to this user on March 8, 2006 7:34:35 AM CST

Thanks Marta. I'll try it again with a lower camera angle. Steve

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Thumb-up    from mauro1/Mauro (11,510) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on March 7, 2006 11:13:31 PM CST (5) Early critique

Seen this before but still a good idea. The water here has a nice soft wave appearance. Placement of the post is balanced in the frame and I like the graduation in light along the water. I'm not a fan of the the perspective though. I would prefer a lower angle to give this more depth. The shadow is interesting but it overlaps with the part of the post under the water making it a bit visually confusing to me there. Might also want to try desaturating this making for a more simple photo with emphasis on light and form. Cheers, Mauro.

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From soflasteve/Steve (17,740) Send mail to this user on March 8, 2006 7:36:11 AM CST

Thanks Mauro. I'll play around with the de-sat suggestion. Appreciate the crit. take care, Steve.

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