some one in mind


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Title     some one in mind
Photographer     2646/Abdullah (5) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     2646/Abdullah
Category     Fine Art
Filter     non
Camera     Olympus Digital 5.0 Mega Pixel
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     January 19, 2006 10:32:02 PM CST
Views     385
Rating     2 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tonypittsley/Tony (1,006) Send mail to this user on January 23, 2006 9:38:46 PM CST (0) Early critique

Hey Abdullah, What an interesting photo. I like the idea and the execution. I would like to have seen a more constant white balance on the artwork itself, and I would have rotated the pencil to get rid of the barcode. Also, there appear to be a few stray eraser tailings below her chin, which are a little distracting, but could be part of the whole layout if you included an eraser. Also, a few odd shadows, probablyl from you, on the bottom of the picture, which could be easily cloned out in Photoshop. All in all, very nice capture. Thanks for sharing. Tony

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From uneekfish/Harl (6,739) Send mail to this user on January 19, 2006 11:50:43 PM CST

Did you draw it as well as photograph it? If so my hat is off to you!

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