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from guyot/Michel (10,517)  
on December 17, 2005 3:52:01 PM CST
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I can't agree with the first critique here:
Objectively, the white are blown and the black is completely black - I feel that as an important element of the composition, something emphasizing the apprensive attitude, something violent and harsh, indeed, suggesting a threat or a fear
By te way, this harsh contrast as background of a slightly blurred model, with a discreet touch of color, is a graphic delight.
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from gymeagary/Gary (9,948)
on December 17, 2005 3:47:03 PM CST
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I agree with Mike about the exposure and the lack of detail in both the blacks and the whites. I also think you have done a good job with the toning. My TU is because your model's expression and pose do to me express apprehension & fear which is what you have set out to communicate. thanks for the view - gymeagary
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from carptrash/Einar (2,956)
on December 17, 2005 3:47:03 PM CST
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I like the tension that you have created here - which the stark contrast and color/b&w help generate. It looks like the moment when she realizes that all the covers ARE going to be removed. Or something. Einar
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from mikestephens/Mike (50,170)
on December 17, 2005 3:36:30 PM CST
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Hi Daniel. Don't take offense to the rating. Please see my explanation in my bio.
The b/g is too overexposed and creates too much of a stark difference with the blacks and whites. The blacks are too dark and the whites are too blown. Nice job, though, on the selective color.
mike s -
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