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Shoko's game

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Title     Shoko's game
Photographer     telemahos/Telemahos (922) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     modus vivendi (people)
Categories     Emotive
Portrait
Camera     Canon 50E
Film     Fuji Superia 400
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     December 13, 2005 12:27:48 AM CST
Views     818
Rating     4 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from cruxman/Mindaugas (571) Send mail to this user on December 13, 2005 2:31:40 AM CST (1) Early critique

Nice. Looks like japanese style photo. Everything is in the right places and bw photo differs from the usual daily shot. Good job.

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From telemahos/Telemahos (922) Send mail to this user on December 13, 2005 12:36:34 PM CST

thanx. btw, my model is japanese

Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mikestephens/Mike (50,170) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on December 13, 2005 1:37:24 AM CST (3) Early critique

Hi Telemahos. Indeed, it is very emotive. The dark portion in the upper left distracts from an overall nice picture that captures the feeling of solitude well IMO. The light and subsequent harsh shadow next to the sofa works for me, but I don't think it was intentional! The only way I can see to improve this is fix the upper left.

mike s~~

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From telemahos/Telemahos (922) Send mail to this user on December 13, 2005 12:35:39 PM CST

thank you mike. very helpful suggestion

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