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from nikolaivodianova/Nikolai (109) 
on December 4, 2005 11:39:29 PM CST
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Hey, I love it! I am going to tell you how much I like it, then I am going to look at the rest of your portfolio for Ideas. Thanks for sharing!
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from sitstill/David (2,928)
on December 4, 2005 8:48:33 PM CST
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I like this shot...the lighting gives off a warm feeling and mixed with the model's pose it makes for a very nice portrait. Her facial expression is nice. I'm not too sure about the crop however...it seems that showing that much of her arms is unneccessary, but who knows. It's just a matter of taste and opinion. Job well done!
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from pafoto/Pedro (1,366)
on December 4, 2005 8:04:30 PM CST
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Excellent lighting all around. This really is one striking portrait, its clarity and presence are notorious. There might be something with the expression - perhaps a certain disconfort - that puts me off slightly, but I can't help but love this photograph.
Well done!
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from marceloc/Marcelo (2,518)
on December 4, 2005 7:22:17 PM CST
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Hello Pawel, Great pictture. Excellent exposure. I also like a lot the composition and the colors of this picture. Very low noise, great. Thanks for sharing, Marcelo.
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from apathy/Scott (1,576)
on December 4, 2005 6:08:18 PM CST
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How nice. I love the skin tone here..the lighting is great. I enjoy her pose and the direction of her eyes. The shadows are a compliment to the light, I'm trying to find the right word but it's safe to say it conveys a nice mood to the viewer. Sharp and crisp too. If there was one thing that seems askew to me, it's the crop. I'm not certain but I wonder if the negative space on the left is too much..although depending on the original there might be more than one way to crop this. Lovely portrait, striking model.
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from ugri21/Gabor (276)
on December 4, 2005 5:46:53 PM CST
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Really good portrait. I also lik the lighting very much and the expression of the girl is just wonderfull. Well caught moment and wonderfull technique.
Well done!
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from bennettskaya/David (1,968)
on December 4, 2005 4:15:10 PM CST
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I looked at most of your portfolio. It's very intersting to see how you developed as a photographer. You have some really lovely shots and a consistent body of work. On this photograph the lighting is great and gives a rich feeling (almost too rich for a young lady like this model) I don't think the model seems very rested - her hands don't look comfortable and her epxression looks like she is straining her eyes to look around to listen to someone (perhaps the photographer?) I don't understand why because in many of your other shots you have get models to relax very naturally. Perhaps the lighting meant this model had to hold still for while? Apart from the things I said, I would be very happy to be able to control lighting like this.
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from rozellner/Bobf (47)
on December 4, 2005 4:00:17 PM CST
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I like this a lot. She's a very attractive model and it's a good pose. I think it could be improved by having her look a little more to the right so some white of the eye would show.
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from monte/Andrea (1,417)
on December 4, 2005 4:00:15 PM CST
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Really like brown tone of this shot. Is quite perfectly balanced, all over the subject, and gives the right mood to the dreaming face of the model. May be there's to much light on the hands, it seems that skin is to much clear, quite disturbing composition.
Thanks for sharing.
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from jameshenry/James (348)
on December 4, 2005 4:00:15 PM CST
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nice all around composition. face seems a bit strained, good even tones, and excellent lighting. great shot...james
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from calicocatsmeow/Jennifer (14,473)
on December 4, 2005 3:58:51 PM CST
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i like the placement of her hands, & the way her eyes are looking away in the opposite direction of the way her head is turned. the brown shirt goes well w/all the other brown tones in the shot. i was going to say that the crop was a little tight on the right for me, but looking @ the full version as opposed to just the thumbnail i'm not so sure now ... oh well. i like the lighting too. nice portrait.
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from deleted138566/deleted (32,193)
on December 4, 2005 3:56:37 PM CST
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A lovely portrait I love the colour tones and the composition works well. Nice lighting excellent infact. Detail is good and expression is nice Regards Necip.
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