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Eline

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Title     Eline
Photographer     janemil/Jan Emil (642) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     My first portfolio
Category     Portrait
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     July 9, 2005 7:59:11 PM CDT
Views     2,156
Rating     4 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from medic5/Beth (218) Send mail to this user on July 9, 2005 8:51:10 PM CDT (3) Early critique

I like your shot, the expression on her face, and her eyes, but I agree, I would either crop to mid-body, or have composed a little differently, where her right arm and hand are about the position of left, and shot from mid-body up, or, do the full shot, maybe just from the side a little, maybe then the pole wouldn't seem so obvious...hope that is helpful. -Beth

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from deleted194386/deleted (55,446) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on July 9, 2005 8:10:54 PM CDT (4) Early critique

Like this one for pose and theme. Use less dof to blur out the obvious backdrop more. Wouldn't think the pillar works well dead center as is. Like the theme its very retro but the boots don't go with the rest of the pic, or the background....cheers.

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