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from bhupy/Bhupi (1,416) 
on May 16, 2005 1:45:21 PM CDT
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nice expressive face, blurring to give a different effect on the top did not seem to work well with the idea.
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from jtdfoto/Jt (793) 
on May 15, 2005 12:21:38 AM CDT
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I like the gray range of the midtones. Also, the exposure and lighting is great. It really looks like a calm, candid moment,
I'm a little on the fence about the blur effect--I think this would be a 2T without that. I would also like to see a bigger copy of this--the small frame doesn't quite do her justice.
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from bergnerm/Mark (7,253)
on May 14, 2005 10:09:02 PM CDT
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Good moment and expression captured. I debated about your choice of bluring effect to draw focus to her eyes... I think the effect itself works, but the light part in the lower right corner detracts significantly from her face. I might try selective darkening/burning this light region, and lightening her face a little to draw the focus where the subject matter is. Also, I think the checkered bracelet detracts a bit too--clone brush out, maybe. I think this is good work, nonetheless.
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from beammc/Mary (4,716)
on May 14, 2005 10:08:21 PM CDT
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This is lovely and soft with wonderful depth and dimension. It's pretty the way her hair blurs at the top and her face and arms come into focus. I think the bracelets are a distraction, though. I think it would have been more elegant without them. Beautiful just the same. (I agree, it is the checkered bracelet that is a distraction. A "simple" gold band on the other arm might pull the two braclets together.)
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