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May She will Stay...

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Title     May She will Stay...
Photographer     akane/Kye-hwan (258) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Project Butterfly Digital 21
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     1/125 sec
Category     Portrait
Digital back/sensor     none
Paper     none
Scanner     None
Filter     None
Lens     EF 100mm F1:2.8 Macro USM
Camera     Canon EOS 1Ds mark II
Format     135
Film     None
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     April 27, 2005 12:11:47 AM CDT
Views     826
Rating     10 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jgarrick/Joe (644) Send mail to this user on April 27, 2005 3:07:28 AM CDT (2)

Very nice, but I'd consider two things:

  • I'd either remove or fully include the pendant. It doesn't seem that it would be that difficult now to clone it out of there. If you were going to shoot this again, you could either shorten the chain or just take it off.
  • The foreground sleeve seems a little hot. I'd consider adjusting that in Photoshop or whatever you use.
    • Other than that, this is great work. I love the catchlights, it's a captivating face, and I love the composition and pose.

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    Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tonyzg/Tony (1,377) Send mail to this user on April 27, 2005 12:28:41 AM CDT (3) Early critique

    I had the same feeling as the last person who commented. There's something about this photo that is interesting that is hard to describe but I do like the cresents in her eyes. I don't see much of that. And the model seems to be a bit life-like if you look at it long enough. Maybe it's just me. And maybe I did figure out why this photo interested me. Good work!

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    Thumb-up Thumb-up    from cathaystray/Mark (214) Send mail to this user on April 27, 2005 12:27:14 AM CDT (4) Early critique

    The reflections in her eyes might be a mere coincidence but to me it is exactly what makes a picture. Two little smileys in her eyes, very well done :)

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    Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from hrebic/Richard (5,737) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on April 27, 2005 12:19:27 AM CDT (1) Early critique

    It's difficult for me to express why I like this photo so much. The lighting is flat, and the reflections in the models eyes are, well, wierd. But it works.

    Nice job.

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