I often pray it's all a lie after all


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Title     I often pray it's all a lie after all
Photographer     jerney/Jerney (2,542) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Portraits
Categories     Emotive
Portrait
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     April 14, 2005 12:02:12 PM CDT
Views     1,116
Rating     5 Thumb-up

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from lorddavid/Dave (390) Send mail to this user on April 15, 2005 3:46:52 AM CDT

Deze is wel non-conforming, want ik zit te veel commentaar te geven op uw foto's blijkbaar, maar het voordel is dat ik dan gewoon in het nederlands kan schrijven, lol Weeral een mooie foto van deze reeks. Alleen had zou ik Scandy haar vingertoppen scherper houden. Heb nu wat de neiging om met men ogen te knipperen, snap je wat ik bedoel? En is scandy een nagelbijtster? Want het valt me op hoe kort haar nagels zijn. :-) En hoe heb je haar zover gekregen haar piercing uit te doen? Of is het ps?

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From jerney/Jerney (2,542) Send mail to this user on April 16, 2005 3:36:40 AM CDT

Rating is overrated 8-)

En ja het is een hardnekkig nagelbijtstertje (ik ruk regelmatig haar vinger uit haar sensuele mondje :P), vandaar ook dat ik de vingertoppen er niet scherp op wilde. En haar piercing zit er gewoon, ook niet weggeshopt. In plaats van haar ringetje heeft ze haar labret in en die zit nu in de schaduw. ;)

En Scandy doet heus wel haar piercing uit als ik denk dat de foto daar mooier van zal worden. *O*

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jlpirock/Jason (21) Send mail to this user on April 14, 2005 2:25:57 PM CDT (4) Early critique

I too like the look of this photo. Couple of things: Touch more DOF I. think if face and hair were just a touch more in focus it would add a bit more "drama". The big difference in skin tones is a bit distracting. Also If God knows everything can we lie to him or just really fooling ourselves.

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From jerney/Jerney (2,542) Send mail to this user on April 16, 2005 3:39:09 AM CDT

Actually I'm questioning his existence in this photo. :)

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mcglough/Mark (3,480) Send mail to this user on April 14, 2005 12:54:17 PM CDT (3) Early critique

I can't figure out if this was selecttively desaturated or if it just stark light whicg is giving an effect. In any case I like this shot, and paricularily like the rosary as it is highlghted. As the previous critique said, the models lips are very sensuous. Mark.

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From jerney/Jerney (2,542) Send mail to this user on April 14, 2005 1:03:53 PM CDT

Thank you. It was selectively desaturated. ;)

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From mcglough/Mark (3,480) Send mail to this user on April 14, 2005 1:06:07 PM CDT

You did an excellent job then. You have left some hints of colour in the blouse and that is what was making me wonder. Well done. Mark.

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Thumb-up    from bpm/Brian (220) Send mail to this user on April 14, 2005 12:36:31 PM CDT (4) Early critique

It's a great idea with a beautiful model however the hands and forearm seem a bit overbright compared to the rest of the skin. It does bring attention to the rosary but perhaps the light should have been falling off after the wrist? Just a thought. . . that and she has very sensuous lips. Overall i like the look of this photo.

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From cptdierberger/Mark (1,262) Send mail to this user on April 14, 2005 4:03:43 PM CDT

I like the color one better!!!

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