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the two of us

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Title     the two of us
Photographer     kingpin66/Mark (2,492) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     other stuff
Categories     Fashion
Portrait
Lens     Canon 24-70mm 2.8L
Camera     Canon EOS
Format     Digital 6.3MP 1.6x form factor for lens
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     March 7, 2005 4:22:58 AM CST
Views     1,584
Rating     5 Thumb-up

Test with a volunteer. Searching around the city looking for a good light- something different and intersting,location and found this cafe getting reflected light from a few skyscrapers and modern glass windows. Thought it had a Phillip Lorca diCorcia look to it. See the need to burn a bit more. I kinda like the light switch on the wall. Would like to shoot here again with different wardrobe.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from marcuse/Marc (1,366) Send mail to this user on March 13, 2005 12:32:42 AM CST (2) Early critique

The only change I would make is to crop the right side to her hair, or remove the wall outlet to allow attention to stay on your subject. Nice shot.

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Thumb-up    from theoldboy/Stephen (9,448) Send mail to this user on March 7, 2005 12:24:15 PM CST (1) Early critique

Huge potential here, lovely model. I think the colours are subtle and not overstated. I'm not sure the double reflection really adds value, if you revisit can you get to a single reflection. Also the white electrical cover and bold black chair(?) detract.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from arthursa/Arthur (658) Send mail to this user on March 7, 2005 5:24:24 AM CST (3) Early critique

Very nice shot, good composition, sharp focus. Very pretty model. The only thing would change is maybe the color of her outfit to some thing more bolder, like red!

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