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No Chess

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Title     No Chess
Photographer     mfuttner/Maureen (16) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Maureen Futtner
Category     Documentary
Lens     50 mm
Camera     Ricoh XR 10
Format     35mm SLR b&w
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     September 18, 2004 7:39:13 PM CDT
Views     292
Rating     3 Thumb-up

Very new to photography, learning a lot ... help me learn some more! Thanks.

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Thumb-up    from erudolph/Ed (731) Send mail to this user on September 20, 2004 2:20:33 PM CDT (0) Early critique

Hi Maureen... I see you are getting good critiques, withg ood ideas on them. :-) I like how you carefully framed the "We Deliver" sign in the upper left corner. I think I'd like this photo better if it were a little more level, rotated to the left. Thanks for putting it up here! -Ed :-)

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Thumb-up    from sometimeswords/Gary (1,983) Send mail to this user on September 18, 2004 8:13:30 PM CDT (1) Early critique

The technical basics are there, exposure and focus. The picture is a bit cluttered, maybe try for simpler photos, concentrate on light, shape and texture, because I think this is where you are heading with your ideas. The picture shows you are looking for subjects and are willing to experiment. Nice going.

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Thumb-up    from wojtekcz/Wojtek (4,775) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on September 18, 2004 7:44:15 PM CDT (1) Early critique

nice idea which could be improved a little by placing the main theme of the shot a little less central in the frame... also the shot appears to be taken from eye level, it might be more interesting viewed from a lower or higher angle, regardless it is very interesting work, thanks for sharing

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