Concentric


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Title     Concentric
Photographer     lespro/Les (1,342) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Outdoors
Categories     Abstract
Cityscape
Scanner     HP ScanJet 3300C
Camera     Pentax 645
Format     Scanned Color Print
Film     Kodak Portra 400UC
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     September 18, 2004 10:50:31 AM CDT
Views     684
Rating     6 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from nickbrunsdon/Nick (5,162) Send mail to this user on September 18, 2004 11:10:19 AM CDT (2) Early critique

Les - Nice idea with the two different aspects of the circular forms, and good bright imagery. I would like to see a less severe crop to show both citcles in their entirety. Also there appear to be a few slight flaws in the background, but this may be the result of scanning(?)

I'd like to see details of shutterspeed, aperture etc.

Thanks for a good pic! Nick

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From lespro/Les (1,342) Send mail to this user on December 26, 2004 12:13:31 PM CST

Aperature: f3.5 Shutter Speed: 1/15 th Lens: medium format 150mm

Thumb-up Thumb-up    from sandrila/Patrick (145) Send mail to this user on September 18, 2004 11:07:17 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Great exposure and the focus seems good. As the previous critique, my only comment is that the crop detracts from the image a bit. I don't mind the tight crop on the right, but the big wheel in the centre would look better to me if the top was not cropped. Still a very good picture, striking as a thumbnail and also when viewed full size.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from maher/Maher (2,458) Send mail to this user on September 18, 2004 10:53:15 AM CDT (2) Early critique

very nice colors, the lights in the dark always captures my eyes, it's just amazing, i would just pay more attention to the cropping made in this shot as it's too tight or not coverting much details , thanks

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