... and in the Love bind them !


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Title     ... and in the Love bind them !
Photographer     akhater/Antoine (2,484) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Portfolio
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     1/2 sec
Categories     Abstract
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Lens     Canon 24-70mm 2.8L
Camera     eos 10d
Format     .jpg
Film     Digital
Submitted     July 12, 2004 5:45:56 AM CDT
Views     842
Rating     4 Thumb-up

For Elvish lovers, here is a picture of our wedding rings, it is engraved with elvish scripts and in english it would mean "Love is not a feelings, it is a verb" I need all your comments about how to make a better picture. Regards

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Thumb-up    from lauwing/Austin (20) Send mail to this user on July 19, 2004 11:46:31 AM CDT (1)

Beautiful picture! I depth of field can be larger and the background may be too plain.

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Thumb-up    from daysleeper/Catalin (764) Send mail to this user on July 19, 2004 4:36:02 AM CDT (1) Early critique

the blurred space at the bottom of the pic is very light and distracting. draws all the attention away from the rings. Try a darker background, a smaller crop or a diffrent angle... experiment

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Thumb-up    from iceman/Yoong (3,054) Send mail to this user on July 12, 2004 11:21:20 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Good idea and congrats on your ring ;) It looks real cool. But anyway. The reflection helps no doubt but you gotta becareful about the horizon, it's slanted to the right now. Also, there are parts on the rings where it is overexposed. Background seems..dirty somehow. Use a one colour background might help.

Also is this shot in studio where you have complete control of light? or is this shot with available light? Anyhow, the source of light may be too strong here, hence the overexposed parts. maybe use a diffuser. I would aslo get rid of the blurred area at the foreground. maybe use a mirror as the base might give better impact.

The shot is good and has potential, but not quite reaching it. ;)

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Thumb-up    from matus/Matus (530) Send mail to this user on July 12, 2004 6:45:20 AM CDT (3) Early critique

Hmm, you actualy took a good one. Try more positions, angles, different lightenings...But I like this one - the reflection helps a lot. What I do not like is the blury "edge" in the bottom part. Go on trying.

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