Main
Photos
Articles
Reviews
Forums
Users
mySIG
Photos  Photo Critiques  Submit Photo  New Date  Search  Help 
Sign In

Gloomy Climb

You are viewing a reduced-resolution thumbnail. You must have an account and be signed in to view photos greater than 72 hours old.

Photo

Title     Gloomy Climb
Photographer     maunsell/Peregine (872) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Urban/cityscape
Categories     Cityscape
Urban
Black and White
Scanner     Lexmark X1150
Lens     Tamron 24-135mm 3.5-5.6 SP IS AF
Camera     F80
Format     35 mm Print Scanned
Film     Kodak Portra 400BW
Submitted     July 8, 2004 4:31:59 PM CDT
Views     386
Rating     3 Thumb-up

Thanks for your comments.

Critiques

This photo currently has 2 conforming critiques. If you write one of the first three conforming critiques for this photo, then you will receive three critique points every time another user rates your critique helpful.

Write a critique

If you find one of these critiques especially helpful--or especially unhelpful--then please take a moment to register your opinion by clicking one of the buttons to the right of the critique.

Show newest first    Show most helpful first
Show oldest first    Show least helpful first

Thumb-up Thumb-up    from nightfall/Alan (2,134) Send mail to this user on August 11, 2004 8:11:40 PM CDT (1) Early critique

Nice idea! The photo has a very cool atmosphere to it, very gloomy. Well done! There's something not quite right though - the top of the stairs is a bit cluttered, but there's not much you could do about that because of the trees. Also you could try cropping off some of the stairs in the bottom of the frame, so the photo is looking straight up the stairs. That way hopefully the viewers eyes are led up to the end of the stair case, rather than down to the bottom (my eyes drifted and i started looking at the bottom few stairs!). Good stuff :)

Reply  Show ratings 

Thumb-up    from babumani/Babu (26,937) Send mail to this user on July 8, 2004 5:12:36 PM CDT (4) Early critique

I like the perspectives, the focus is soft at the bottom and increases when it goes up, I think a smaller apperture would have helped here.
I would have prefered to compose it in a horizontal format and included some of details on the wall at the right side.
Slight bluish coloring is visible at the sky (top). Thanks for sharing.

Reply  Show ratings 

Comments

Comments are different from critiques. Comments carry no rating, you may write more than one comment per photo, and you may comment on your own photos. If you want to rate this photo, then you should write a critique instead.

Add a comment

There are no comments on this photo.

Return to photos