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from alx/Alexandros (2,260) 
on August 14, 2004 9:57:12 PM CDT
The sky is great, the whole shot is so perfectly entonated... and everyone is looking away from the sunset! Great shot!
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from murray938/Murray (6,949)
on May 22, 2004 9:04:24 AM CDT
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Wonderful urban snapshot!
The cloudy sky get to the photo a right atmosphere, something like the end of the world!
Regards
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from dannypiazz/Daniele (983)
on April 26, 2004 4:41:49 PM CDT
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Nice photograph, the thumbnail captured my attention. The real size image is even better. I like hte dark sky, it adds drama to the scene. Congrats. Daniele
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from francisbrowne/Francis (1,405)
on March 6, 2004 4:48:05 AM CST
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i agree with aprevious crit that this has much potential. the geometry of the pattern in the foreground and the positioning of the 2 people works well but could be empahised if you lost some of the detail beyond which is just so busy with all shapes of different buildings. i'd suggets a shallower dof for such pictures
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from lenmarriott/Len (834)
on March 5, 2004 7:29:21 PM CST
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Vittorio, Well composed. I refer to the position in the frame of the man & woman. Lots of mystery here. The faces of the man & woman are concealed in shadow. Who\what is she waiting for? What does the man's document say? Why is the sky so dark? What type of complex is in the background? The low backlight enhances this mystery! If you were attempting to create a dark mood you've succeeded. Best, LM.
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from mc66/Marco (7,371)
on January 20, 2004 4:41:47 PM CST
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De Chirico in Berlin? A shot with good potential, whose many elements are brought together by the powerful geometry of the flooring pattern. There are some flaws that leave me doubtful, however. Apart from the apparent clockwise tilt, the man to the right is neither portaited in detail, nor as a silhouette, since his shape is hidden by the dark buildings behind his shoulders and head and by the shadow next to his leg.
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from max972/Massimo (2,332)
on January 20, 2004 4:22:06 PM CST
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Particular shot...It works well in bw and ther ie a well execute composition but i think that the main subject is not enaught readyble ,it's too dark and the sky is pixelate..That's a pity becouse this could be a very nice shot!!
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from donschaeffer/Don (12,842)
on January 20, 2004 4:19:10 PM CST
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In order to get an effective sky, you have made the whole photo too dark and murky. Sharpness seems over-corrected, leaving halos around key features. The phot could be improved IMO if you could burn in the sky and lighten the ground a little.
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From vittorio/Vittorio (10,385)
on January 20, 2004 4:22:24 PM CST
Thanks for the critique, Don, but the picture was counterlight so that
people are dark in the negative too. Coming to sharpness, I do not adjust
pictures, because I directly scan prints and do not use PS. Bye.
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From emeel/Emiel (1,665)
on January 20, 2004 4:30:31 PM CST
After scaning you should ALWAYS use an unsharp mask, as there will become
some blur due to the scanning!
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