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from rvwv/Ray (11,655) 
on March 5, 2004 12:26:26 AM CST
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Nice photo Luc. Interesting coloring in the background and nice composition. Photo captures the women very well but could be sharper.
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from wwcsig/Wolfgang (15,085)
on February 10, 2004 10:02:34 PM CST
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That's really nice. I don't mind the centered composition here at all. First - you generate symmetry by the walkway that is framed by the colored leaves and the trees but the symmetry is broken enough by the leaves on the top of the frame to avoid the totally balanced on-center composition.
A little less DOF would help, also the pedestriance in the background are unfortunate.
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from martijn/Rob (6,826)
on December 19, 2003 4:17:59 AM CST
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Luc, you must be a very Luc-ky man with all those friendly models. It is a pity that you stood straight in front of the persons. Two meter to the left, if possible, might haven given a nice perspective from the trees on the right.
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from osram/Paul (1,156)
on December 11, 2003 4:40:13 PM CST
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Apart from the distracting people in the background, and the girl on the right looking at the camera, a good shot.
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from theomolina/Theodoro (5,957)
on November 17, 2003 8:38:12 PM CST
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Hello, Luc!
I really dont know if this shot deserves 3 or 2TU. For my taste, the subject on the center dont works well (and it not just a rule matter, is a taste matter). I also think that you could use the curves on the path better, creating a leading line on background of the shot.
But like I said, i am not sure if it is a techinical issue or a taste one.
Congrats, Theo!
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from finnkristensen/Finn (6,665)
on November 17, 2003 2:17:34 PM CST
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Hello Luc. Very good atmosphere in this photo, the mother and doughter taking a walk in the nature is a very good subject. I would maybe try and crop it a little different though, since the people in the background is a little distracting, i guess a little crop in the left side would work nicely. My best Regards
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from niggmanfred/Manfred (55,560)
on November 17, 2003 11:58:41 AM CST
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To hello Luc, a human, agitating and responding picture of the nut/mother
with the daughter with to walk go, you the instant for this admission well
selected, reflect here nevertheless here the harmony in the admission again,
which is location super selected and bring a colored and glad background in
addition, later everyone gladly of this moment to remind, good photo work is
you succeeded, excuse my English, best regards Manfred
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from hassan/Hassan (18,449)
on November 16, 2003 3:54:47 PM CST
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A very nice autum mood , with hight details and good composition , the Mother and daughter gave the image a reall feeling of motion with good experssions , may be as personal tast I prefer the two woman a bit far from the cam. ,, still a very good shot...Regards ........~Hassan~
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from kienmoser/Gisela (65,990)
on November 15, 2003 10:38:05 AM CST
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hello Luc, a pretty motive is this forest way with the autumn tendency and the two nice ladies, which make a walk here, I finds to you this admission well succeeded, the colors is much clear and the sharpness is well... best regards, Gisela
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from mikescot/Mike (25,973)
on November 14, 2003 1:06:25 AM CST
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Nice autumn shot. I like very good colours of autumn in this shot. Good moment for shot- lovely scene. Nice companion portrait shot. Regards, Luc.
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from kitkit/Kit (3,964)
on November 13, 2003 9:08:39 PM CST
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Hello, Luc, this is a good pic of park. Most people pointed out the flaw of the pic already. I just mentioned that the white shirt of the lady is over bright in little bit. To use the burn tool to solve this problem is OK. Thanks for sharing ^_^
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from chungho/Ray (24,754)
on November 13, 2003 10:12:53 AM CST
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Hi, Luc, good feeling of pic. Composition of pic is fine. However, I prefer the size of mother and daughter are smaller. Also, the people at the left side of pic is a distraction. I prefer to clone out this stuff.
Brightness and color of pic is good, well done as usual.
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from gerardverhagen/Gerard (19,020)
on November 12, 2003 5:07:17 PM CST
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Hi Luc, nice couple. You must be a proud man with this beautiful couple. The photo is good, sharp and with nice autumn colors. I don't now but the location looks familiar to me.
Grtz. Gerard
Did you see my friends in "Having Fun"?
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from erina/Erina (10,987)
on November 12, 2003 5:06:23 PM CST
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Nice Snap shot. Focus is perfect and DOF just good enough. I think the mother/daughter is too center on the screen and perhaps it can be better if both of them looking at you, or if you manage to catch them chit-chating while walking.
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from wself/Wayne (127)
on November 12, 2003 5:05:41 PM CST
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good subject matter and surroundings. very crisp picture. i'm not sure if a filter would have helped, but my only complaitn would be that the picture might be a little too crisp. it almost feels like the subjects are on, rather than in the picture.
good work.
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