Slow Motion


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Title     Slow Motion
Photographer     bijanb/Bijan (2,441) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Portfolio
Categories     Abstract
Landscape
Sky
Lens     Sigma 28-300 DL Hyperzoom
Camera     Dynax 5 Minolta
Film     Kodak ASA 200
Submitted     September 25, 2003 12:56:22 PM CDT
Views     1,169
Rating     8 Thumb-up

I had this idea from an astronomical photo with an long exposure of sun set.But i done it on another way with a self made filter.The first sun spots are 6 minutes of passed time and the other 4 and 2 minutes.So i hope that you like it.Maybe that the last shot of the real sunset could be better?

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Thumb-up    from sesp5228/David (28) Send mail to this user on September 25, 2003 6:37:45 PM CDT (1)

Its pretty good work, spacings are a bit jagged (need to use a stop watch), horizon is a bit disconcerting ...try to keep horizontal. I know how hard they are to do well; keep trying...I am.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from sixgun/Tom (914) Send mail to this user on September 25, 2003 5:45:44 PM CDT (1) Early critique

Very creative, good idea. I like the effect. I think maybe the last shot would be better if the sun was a bit lower giving you a true sinking feeling.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from leodium/Verrechia (54) Send mail to this user on September 25, 2003 1:11:04 PM CDT (1) Early critique

[French] Superbe photo décomposant le parcours de l'astre solaire. Je me demande si mon appareil pour faire la même chose. C'est aussi un Minolta :)
[English:Systran]Superb photograph breaking up the course of the solar star. I wonder whether my apparatus to make the same thing. It is also Minolta :)

Boris

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From bijanb/Bijan (2,441) Send mail to this user on September 26, 2003 11:09:06 AM CDT

Merci for your comment,you need a sunlight filter and good chornograph and with more time exposures you will have a good result.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from grimyrily/Graeme (7,396) Send mail to this user on September 25, 2003 12:59:42 PM CDT (1) Early critique

I think this is brilliant. I would have never thought of composing a shot like this. This is fabulous work. Very very well done.

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From bijanb/Bijan (2,441) Send mail to this user on October 29, 2003 11:48:08 AM CST

Thanks for your comment.There is always things that could be done better and surely in this one.Again thanks.

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