Critique Ratings

Hi W, the pic attracts at first glance congrats!, and continues to hold your attention.. so far so good. However, one cannot help commenting on the potential of the photo which has all the features for a fantastic sunset; if you'd worked on the frame, like eliminate that dense dark shapeless object in the foreground (contours are what make silhouttes) perhaps we'd have gotten a sharper silhoutte of the reeds, birds against the highlights of the different hues of sunset ? happy clicking, digipixelite.