from d242r/Daniel (2,096)
on April 30, 2012 12:07:19 AM CDT
Like your model and eye contact is good, but your treatmant of the background becomes distracting. Processing is zealous( at a minimum)and I'm hopefull the images cost the girl nothing. As a center composition, she needs to excel, wich she does not. Entirely your fault.....
Crop is too tight....poor editing, etc...
Nice model, just need to present her in an attractive fashion~