from convolvulus/David (3,077)
on September 19, 2010 5:42:35 PM CDT
You'll probably find that if you critique someone else's photos they will (maybe!) do one for you.
On the photo I like the rough low tech feel to the shot and it doesn't look too posed which is good. You could maybe criticise the cropping of the head and legs and the skewed background but that I think is part on the charm and spontaneity of the shot