Critique Ratings

Waiting room
Thumb-up    from photocrit/Eain (3,247) Send mail to this user on May 4, 2009 2:08:02 PM CDT (4) Early critique

A very good idea. It needs a little refinement. First composition: Why not move further along the rail and lose the bracket that leads the eye out of the photo? Next why not either make more of the shadow patterns with better lighting or crop to a more panoramic format? Either would be interesting. Now the title: the concept of waiting is good but perhaps could be even stroinger if there was one garment on the hangars - a lonely sock or something like that.. something that is waiting for the return of the owner rather than the empty row less dramatically waiting for the pupils or team to arrive. This is a photograph that could be returned to and made much meore effective because the basic idea is there! Eain

Ratings

Thumb-up Helpful
arturdy/Artur (40,365) Send mail to this user
leren/Luc (32,427) Send mail to this user
yellowgrey/Barbro (15,841) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user
simonthma/Simon (1,207) Send mail to this user

Thumb-down Unhelpful Nobody has rated this critique unhelpful.

Return to photo