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from olvwu/Jung-Pang (529) 
on January 19, 2005 8:38:44 PM CST
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Hi Francois, I think this piece is good which illustrated the life of your subject, but there might be something to suggest: (a) The focus may be not right, or you need a bit sharpening. (b) These people didn't have a strong eye contact with the camera, which may distract viewer, or you just intended to capture their casual movement, but I think it doesn't work that well. Oliver
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